Roses of Black,
A symbol of of Death,
You can't take back.
Roses of Blue,
Attain the impossible,
Just speak what's true.
Roses of White,
All that is secret,
Just like that night.
Interesting how a change of colour can mean something new,
Strange how lives can change by a couple of words concerning you.
I'd love to be able to take it back,
Loving you, a rose that's black.
Widows and Spiders in the window,
Is murder such a sin though?
Blood fills the bath in which I stand,
Remembering you with a toaster in my hand,
My heart could never get over the scar,
So we will forever embrace the eternity of death.
Nooses don't speak lies, nor does death.
I think you could have cut the fourth verse... cut it into 4 lines, it just sounds a bit long...
I don't see the message though
I could of, but it would ruin the rhyming scheme and part of the message for the sake of the meter... not much a fan of meter as my other poems should tell people.
Oh, the message is there, I have a knack of hiding things infront of people's eyes. Makes me a god at hide-and-seek with my cousins
Keep trying!